Win the sound of fertility
Religion, access of ecstasy
Rhythm of lies comes to choke
Recognize, let’s take the oath
Fight the battle of sincerity
Come to lord, He’ll show legitimacy
Rip fowl land of dirt
Let’s lash the hand of flirt
Rally round to build up wise.
Seal gravel, reach paradise
Believe this candor is rife
Fly into the limpidness of life
Monday, February 9, 2009
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your writing is very lyrical. Interesting in its abstractness. You' might want to try experimenting with structure though. And maybe write about your life generally. :-)
ReplyDeletenot a bad start though.