Monday, February 9, 2009

Limpidness of life:

Win the sound of fertility
Religion, access of ecstasy

Rhythm of lies comes to choke
Recognize, let’s take the oath

Fight the battle of sincerity
Come to lord, He’ll show legitimacy

Rip fowl land of dirt
Let’s lash the hand of flirt

Rally round to build up wise.
Seal gravel, reach paradise

Believe this candor is rife
Fly into the limpidness of life

1 comment:

  1. your writing is very lyrical. Interesting in its abstractness. You' might want to try experimenting with structure though. And maybe write about your life generally. :-)
    not a bad start though.

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